Wednesday, November 22, 2006

there was a fetus once

but that was taken care of

blushing bride
night before night before
marriage

she burnt her journals

before rose petals
escaped from her
wrists

5 Comments:

Blogger denielle said...

feels like getting hit in the stomache,
but by such a beautiful fist.

1:38 PM  
Blogger jstn said...

denielle said it well
good stuff carly
i like the poetry
your writting
keep making the word
a better
place through words

12:56 AM  
Blogger Rob Budde said...

oof

7:49 AM  
Blogger flic said...

Never burn your journals.

8:17 PM  
Blogger promiseme4 said...

profound..

3:47 PM  

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